just a small town girl, living in a lonely world

I've been working on this one for... fffffffff, two years now? Not because it's terribly difficult, but rather because I'm just too lazy and uninspired. Also, I had it almost done when my computer fucked up so royally and I lost everything I had stored on it. That further killed my interest in finishing this.

So now I've finally gotten around to it, hoping that Sanzo doesn't kill me for taking this long to colour her lineart. Though I did warn her that it would take me an eternity. :'D

I've been out of practice, and it shows. Halfway through I totally lost the light source and went along with whatever.
I'm in a dire need of crits/suggestions/opinions on the way I've coloured it. You don't have to know the characters to evaluate the colouring. Pretty please~ *__* <3
( Ryou + his yami )